This problem would require an extended response
worth 4 points. A 4 point response would address
all four of the required aspects of the race
and correctly applying times and/or distances
to the first three aspects, and tells who won.
Don't forget to say who won the race either!
The fewer the bulleted items included in your
response, the fewer points you will receive
for your answer.
Here is a possible 4 point response:
| The
two racers had 400 m. to go. Pow! They were
off. Manuel was ahead of Jesse by about 25
m in the first 1/2 minute. By 45 seconds,
Manuel was ahead by about 40 m. Manuel and
Jesse were both going at a steady pace. At
1 minute, Manuel started to slow down, giving
Jesse a chance to catch up. At 1 1/4 minutes,
Jesse did precisely that. She started to catch
up with Manuel, who was still declining. Jesse
passed Manuel up at 1 minutes 45 seconds.
Jesse won with a time of 1 minutes and 50
seconds. Manuel came behind with a time of
2 minutes and 5 seconds. Congratulations,
Jesse! |
Here is a possible 2 point response:
The
race is on between Jesse and Manuel.
At one minute Manuel was in the lead
at 250 meters and shortly behind him
was Jesse at 200 meters.
That
was a quick catch up because at the
end of the race Jesse won, and just
a few seconds behing was Manuel. |
Notice the difference
between the two answers? The more complete
and specific you are with your answer the more
points you will receive.