Internet Academy ALP Reading
Assessment Lessons Helpful Tools Rubrics Index Home
Federal Way Public Schools  
Assessment
Lessons 5-7
Analyzing, Interpreting, and Synthesizing

Name:
Teacher:

Assessment Directions:

Ask your teacher about timing: This assessment may take longer than one class period to complete. Decide with your teacher whether it would be better for you to take this assessment in two days, or if you have extended time and can take it all at once.

It's easy to divide into two days if there is not enough time to complete the entire assessment at once.

  • Day 1: Read "The Cold Equations" and "Those Winter Sundays," and answer Questions 1-6.
  • Day 2: Read "Young Ladies Don't Slay Dragons" and "The Base Stealer," and answer Questions 7-11.
Important: If you stop after Question 6, go to the bottom of the page and click the Score Your Answer button even if you aren't finished. Print the partial results for your teacher. The answers are not saved once you close the page, so if you don't print the results from Day 1, you will lose your answers and your hard work! The next day, start where you left off.

Take your time and do your best! At the end, you will see your score for the multiple choice questions, and will print the assessment for your teacher to score the short answer and extended responses.

Directions:

A young stowaway on a starship learns she miscalculated the consequences of sneaking on board in order to see her brother on a faraway planet. The equation Extra Weight + Space Regulations = Stowaway to be Jettisoned is cold, calculating and without chance for appeal. You read the first part of this story in Lesson 5 (if you want to review, go back to Lesson 5 and start this assessment another time). Find out what happens to Marilyn. Read Part 2 of the story, "The Cold Equation."

Then answer Questions 1 - 5. Use all your reading skills and also the tips you know about answering questions.


The Cold Equation,
Part 2


Question 1:

What kind of person is Marilyn's brother, Gerry?

A. Unfeeling
B. Inconsiderate and selfish
C. Proud, but foolish
D. Generous and kind

Question 2:

Which of the following happened second?

A. The pilot jettisoned Marilyn from the EDS.
B. Marilyn wrote letters to her parents and brother.
C. Marilyn spoke with her brother by radio.
D. The pilot contacted Group Two by radio, but Gerry wasn't back yet.

Question 3:

Which of the following sentences from the story contains an example of personification?
A. On Woden, for example, there are only sixteen men.
B. She was a lonely child, saying her last good-byes.
C. He listened to her pen whisper to the paper.
D. Lotus Lake was almost totally gone in shadow.

Question 4:

The basic conflict of this story is . . .
A. the pilot's struggle to get through to Marilyn's brother before she dies.
B. between Marilyn's desire to be brave and her fear of dying.
C. the struggle between Marilyn's brother and the pilot of the EDS.
D. between human sentiment and the harsh requirements of the "cold equation."

Question 5:

The conflict of this story is resolved when . . .
A. Marilyn is jettisoned from the EDS, balancing the "cold equation."
B. Marilyn talks with her brother by radio and bids him good-bye.
C. the pilot goes back to his chair, with the slow steps of a man old and weary.
D. we realize that there is nothing that can save Marilyn from death in space.

Directions:

Read the poem, "Those Winter Sundays," and write a powerful response to Question 6.

The poem is linked to the book icon on the right. Use all your reading skills and also the tips you know about making connections between texts.


Those Winter Sundays

Question 6:

In "The Cold Equation," Marilyn regrets not telling her parents how much she loved them and appreciated their sacrifices for her. The pilot responds to her, "they've always known." He means it's human nature on both sides: for people to regret not telling others how much they are loved, and also for people to understand they are loved even if it isn't spoken.

Long after his childhood is over, the speaker in the poem "Those Winter Sundays," tells us about his father.

  • Would the speaker agree with the pilot's idea about human nature?
  • Explain your answer with details from the poem.

Type your answer here:

Now score your answer.

Remember a short answer response earns 0, 1, or 2 points. A complete and accurate answer would earn 2 points. Review the criteria in this chart before you score your response.

Score
Criteria
2 points
  • accurately analyzes the feelings of the poem's speaker about his dad
  • makes thoughtful connection to Marilyn's feelings in the story about her regret for not having told her parents how much she loved them
  • makes thoughtful connection between the story and poem about "human nature."
  • uses meaningful information from passage to support ideas
1 point
  • partial understanding of the feelings of the speaker in the poem about his dad
  • partial connection to Marilyn's feelings in the story about her regret of not having told her parents how much she loved them
  • maybe shows difficulty figuring out connection between the story and poem about "human nature."
  • tries to use information from passage, but it might be incomplete or not make sense
0 points
  • little or no understanding of the speaker's feelings for his father, a connection to Marilyn's regret or the pilot's idea about "human nature"
  • "I don't know."
  • no examples from the passage

My short answer response for Question 6 earned a score of   because:

Directions:

Lightening up a bit with some needed humor, enjoy reading "Young Ladies Don't Slay Dragons," by Joyce Hovelsrud.

Before you even open the story, think about what kind of story this might just from the title.

  • If you predicted it is a fairy tale because of the dragon, you're right.
  • If you also predicted it is not a traditional fairy tale because that would be about a knight slaying a dragon, you're double right!

Good for you.Those predictions will help you make analyze the story as you read.


Young Ladies
Don't Slay Dragons

Watch for many elements different from the traditional fairy tale, roles of characters, activities of characters, twists in the plot.

Then answer Questions 7 - 10. Use all your reading skills and also the tips you know about answering questions.

Question 7:

Which words best describe Penelope?

A.
Mechanically adept and sneaky
B.
Confident and smart
C.
Argumentative and stubborn
D.
Inquisitive but demanding

Question 8:

  • First tell what two words you chose in Question 7 to describe Princess Penelope.
  • Then support your answer with evidence from the story.
  • Tell what she says and does that led you to choose your answer.

Write your answer here:

Now score your answer.

Remember a short answer response earns 0, 1, or 2 points. A complete and accurate answer would earn 2 points. Review the criteria in this chart before you score your response.

Score
Criteria
2 points
  • complete and clear explanation of how the two words in Question 7 describe Princess Penelope
  • uses meaningful information from passage to support ideas
1 point
  • partial explanation of how the two words in Question 7 describe Princess Penelope
  • maybe shows difficulty figuring out important and unimportant details
  • tries to use information from passage, but it might be incomplete or not make sense
0 points
  • little or no understanding of how the two words describe Princess Penelope
  • "I don't know."
  • no examples from the passage

My short answer response for Question 8 earned a score of     because


Question 9:

The king scratched his head and thought about that for awhile. Princess Penelope was always giving him something to think about. For one thing, he thought her beauty was unsurpassed by that of any princess on earth. For another, it seemed she never behaved as beautiful princesses should.

The princess didn't really think that was that. But she knew her father did. So she said no more about it -- to him anyway.

From these two passages, we know that the point of view in the story is . . .

A. the author's
B. first person
C. omniscient
D. the queen's

Question 10:

As Princess Penelope said, "It seemed to her that a young lady could do anything she wanted, if she set her mind to it."

The author sends a serious message by using exaggeration and irony to poke fun at traditional roles. It is especially effective told in the format of a traditional fairy tale because we expect the character to behave in certain ways. They don't. They behave opposite of what is expected.

  1. List five examples of exaggeration or irony in the story. The example may be about a character or an event. Be sure to include what we would expect, and what actually happens in the story. There is a chart below to help you get started thinking of roles of characters and events you might list. You are not limited to the ideas on the chart of course, they are just a brain-starter.

  2. From your listed examples, explain how humor, irony and exaggeration are used to get across a serious message.

Examples of ideas to start your thinking. You can fill in the rest on a piece of notebook paper to help organize your thoughts for your writing.

  Expected in a traditional fairy tale Young Ladies Don't Slay Dragons
Role of King "in charge," strong, wise, powerful  
Role of Queen  

Impatient - temper tantrums

"She slammed the honey jar on the table and stomped out of the room."

Role of Royal Wizard Wise, magical, serious, hard worker  
Role of Princess playing lute, knitting sweaters, being beautiful, crying, asking for help  
Role of Prince    
Role of Dragon    
Brave Men eager to pursue dragons for reward  
Method of slaying a dragon    
Someone important has been trapped or turned into an animal - only to be freed by another character in the tale    
"happily ever after"   Penelope says she won't be the traditional queen, and the prince says that's OK! He understands the message of the story too, and with new roles, they can have a fairy tale ending.

List five examples of exaggeration or irony in the story here:

Explain how humor, irony and exaggeration are used to get across a serious message here:

Now score your answer.

Remember an extended response earns 4, 3, 2, or 1 points. A complete, accurate, and thoughtful answer would earn 4 points. Review the criteria in this chart before you score your response.

Score your own writing using this criteria:

Score
Criteria
4 - Extensive (top notch, bullseye!)
  • thoroughly (completely) analyzes information, compares / contrasts expectations of traditional fairy tale to "Young Ladies" story
  • interpretation of humor, exaggeration and irony in story shows insight
  • ample (more than enough) relevant (makes sense) examples from the passage to support ideas
3 - Basic (good, middle of target)
  • analyzes information, compares / contrasts expectations of traditional fairy tale to "Young Ladies" story
  • interpretation of humor, exaggeration and irony in story are thoughtful
  • sufficient (enough) examples from the passage to support ideas
2 - Partial (needs practice, outer edge of target)
  • analyzes part of information, compares / contrasts part of expectations of traditional fairy tale to "Young Ladies" story
  • interpretation of humor, exaggeration and irony in story are simple or right on the surface
  • tries to use evidence from the passage to support ideas, but they may not be relevant (may not make sense).
1 - Minimal (try again, off target)
  • difficulty analyzing information, comparing / contrasting expectations of traditional fairy tale to "Young Ladies" story
  • may not include interpretation of humor, exaggeration and irony in story or may write "I don't know."
  • little or no evidence from the passage included

My extended answer response for Question 10 earned a score of     because:


Directions:

And finally a treat for all you Mariner fans! Read "The Base Stealer." Go M's!

Notice how the title is a main clue to the subject of the poem. Consider how the words of the poem paint a picture of tension and action.

Answer Question 11. Enjoy!


The Base Stealer

Question 11:

Figurative language activates this poem, comparing the base stealer's movements to other actions.

Which of the following comparisons is not stated as a simile in the poem?

A. The base stealer compared to a kid skipping rope,
B. The base stealer compared to a runner stepping sideways,
C. The base stealer compared to a hovering, ecstatic bird,
D. The base stealer compared to a tightrope-walker,

Be sure to:

  • Click the Finished button to score the multiple choice questions
  • On the next page click the print button to give the assessment to your teacher who will score the short answer questions.

 
Vocabulary

©Internet Academy