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Lesson 10
Extending Information Beyond the Text
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Practice 2 - Instruction:

These two familiar passages were written by the same author, Gary Soto. In both the poem, "Oranges," and the passage "Left Hand, Right Hand," Soto describes a boy without enough money to pay for what he wants. The resolutions turn out very differently, although the boys both start out in the same situation; they don't have enough money to buy what they want. The question you will be answering focuses on a generalization you might find to be true.

Both passages are linked to the book icons below. Check out the question you will be answering to jump-start your brain to be aware of your own response as you read. This gives your reading a purpose and activates your brain cells!


Oranges

Left Hand, Right Hand

Before Reading:

Read the prompt you will be answering, so that there is a place in your brain to file away responses as you read!

Short Answer Prompt:

The teen in "Oranges" and the first grader in "Left Hand, Right Hand," both face a similar situation, not having enough money to pay for merchandise. Because of the clerk's reaction to the teen who offers an orange as payment for the candy, he leaves the story with his pride intact. The first grader, after facing a clerk who asks for payment and then asks him to leave the store, walks away embarrassed and ashamed.

"Embarrassing situations can be educational" is a generalization that might be made after reading these two selections.

Do you think that an embarrassing situation can ever be educational? (Can a lesson be learned from an embarrassing situation?) Give an example that is different from the situation in the reading selections. Use details from the passages to make a connection between them and your example.


Don't forget to include all three key elements needed for a solid 2 point response!

  1. Your answer to the question: Do you think an embarrassing situation can ever be educational?
  2. An example of a possibly embarrassing situation, different from the boys no money to pay situation in the reading selections, that might turn out to be educational.
  3. Connection between the passagess and your example (use the text to help explain your example).

Choose ONE of the following three options for writing your response.

1.
If Microsoft Word is available on your computer, this document allows you to type your answer, use spell check, save, copy/paste text, and/or print the page to turn in.
<< Click here to open a word form for your response.
 
2.
This file can be printed, and allows you to use your best penmanship (yes, real writing instead of typing), and turn it in to your teacher.
<< Click here to open a .pdf file for your response.
 
3.
Copy/Paste
If you are a student taking this class through IA, you will need to use this document for your response. Follow directions on your checklist to copy/paste into an e-mail.
<< Click here for the text.

You are the an expert at scoring short answer responses now. Go ahead and score your own writing using this criteria:

Points Rubric
2
  • evaluates appropriate information and offers opinion
  • develops thoughtful interpretations of the educational value of embarrassing situations by providing an original and different example
  • makes thoughtful comparisons with sufficient, relevant evidence from passages to connect to the different example
1
  • evaluates limited information and offers basic or superficial opinion
  • develops average or simple interpretations of the educational value of embarrassing situations by providing another example
  • attempts to use evidence from passages to connect to the different example; support may be limited or irrelevant (not make sense).
0
  • little or no understanding of the boys' situation in the passages and does not offer an opinion regarding lessons to be learned, or the educational value of embarrassing situations
  • may answer, "I don't know."
  • no example of own and no evidence from passages

This may help identify the key elements in your writing.

Yes No Criteria
I stated my opinion about whether embarrassing situations could ever be educational, or if you could learn lessons from them.
I included an example of my own in which a lesson might be learned from an embarrassing situation (or not if that was my opinion).
I wrote an insightful few sentences connecting the boys in the passages and their situation to my example of something different, but embarrassing.

If you check all three yes buttons, chances are you earned 2 points! Way to go.

If you didn't check all three yes buttons, take a look at what was missing, and go back and revise your answer until you can check all three yes buttons!

When you are totally satisfied with your answer, print the Word document with your answer and score for your teacher.

You've worked hard! Hopefully you had some fun too, thinking about other situations.

Practice 3 >>

Vocabulary

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