Practice 2:
Instruction:
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"Weep No More,
My Lady," is linked to the book icon on the right.
Since the question includes the text needed, you might not
need to review the story for this short answer if you've just
finished Practice 1. Just in case, it is there for your review!
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Short Answer
Prompt:
At the beginning
of the story, the author writes:
The moonlight
symphony of swamp creatures hushed abruptly, and the dismal
bog was as peaceful as unborn time and seemed to brood
in its silence.
- Complete the chart below. List
2 literary elements (simile, metaphor, or personification)
used in the sentence above and tell what objects or ideas
are being compared or personified in the description.
- Then add 1-2 sentences telling
how the figurative language in this introduction helps set
the scene for the story.
Note: What key elements will be needed for a full two point answer?
Choose ONE of the following three options for writing your response.
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If Microsoft Word is available on your computer, this document allows you to type your answer, use spell check, save, copy/paste text, and/or print the page to turn in.
<< Click here to open a word form for your response. |
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This file can be printed, and allows you to use your best penmanship (yes, real writing instead of typing), and turn it in to your teacher.
<< Click here to open a .pdf file for your response. |
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If you are a student taking this class through IA, you will need to use this document for your response. Follow directions on your checklist to copy/paste into an e-mail.
<< Click here for the text. |
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You are the an expert at scoring short answer
responses now. Go ahead and score your own writing using
this criteria:
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Rubric |
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- two examples of figurative language, identified correctly
by term (all four sections of the chart are complete and
accurate)
- explanation includes information from given sentence,
along with insight and reasoning as to impact of figurative
language
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- partial understanding of figurative language (all
four sections of the chart are filled in, but may include
an inaccurate identification of term or example)
- 2nd part of answer is may be partial
- explanation includes information from given sentence,
but may not be clear or show thoughtful reasoning as to
impact of figurative language
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- little or no understanding of figurative language (parts
of chart not filled in with either examples, or terms)
- no explanation or one that does not make sense
- may write "I don't know" or give information
not related to figurative language, setting, or mood of
the story. For Example:
- Identify a literary element:
Literary
Element: scary
object or idea compared: moonlight
- Tell
how the figurative language sets the scene for the
story.
swamps
are cool
- "Scary" isn't a term of figurative language.
"Moonlight" is not connected to "scary"
in the sentence. The answer to the second question does
not relate to figurative language either, but seems to be
the reader's opinion.
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This may help identify the key elements in your writing.
If you check all four yes buttons,
chances are you earned 2 points. Way to go!
If you didn't check all four yes
buttons, take a look at what was missing, and go back and revise
your answer until you can check all four yes
buttons!
When you are totally satisfied with your answer, print the
Word document with your answer and score
for your teacher.
Let's work with some figurative language in this same story.
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