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Lesson 5
Understanding Literary Elements
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Practice 2:

Instruction:

"Weep No More, My Lady," is linked to the book icon on the right. Since the question includes the text needed, you might not need to review the story for this short answer if you've just finished Practice 1. Just in case, it is there for your review!


Weep No More,
My Lady


Short Answer Prompt:

At the beginning of the story, the author writes:

The moonlight symphony of swamp creatures hushed abruptly, and the dismal bog was as peaceful as unborn time and seemed to brood in its silence.

  1. Complete the chart below. List 2 literary elements (simile, metaphor, or personification) used in the sentence above and tell what objects or ideas are being compared or personified in the description.

  2. Then add 1-2 sentences telling how the figurative language in this introduction helps set the scene for the story.

Note: What key elements will be needed for a full two point answer?


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You are the an expert at scoring short answer responses now. Go ahead and score your own writing using this criteria:

Points Rubric
2
  • two examples of figurative language, identified correctly by term (all four sections of the chart are complete and accurate)
  • explanation includes information from given sentence, along with insight and reasoning as to impact of figurative language
1
  • partial understanding of figurative language (all four sections of the chart are filled in, but may include an inaccurate identification of term or example)
  • 2nd part of answer is may be partial
  • explanation includes information from given sentence, but may not be clear or show thoughtful reasoning as to impact of figurative language
0
  • little or no understanding of figurative language (parts of chart not filled in with either examples, or terms)
  • no explanation or one that does not make sense
  • may write "I don't know" or give information not related to figurative language, setting, or mood of the story. For Example:
    • Identify a literary element:
      Literary Element: scary
      object or idea compared: moonlight
    • Tell how the figurative language sets the scene for the story.
      swamps are cool
  • "Scary" isn't a term of figurative language. "Moonlight" is not connected to "scary" in the sentence. The answer to the second question does not relate to figurative language either, but seems to be the reader's opinion.

This may help identify the key elements in your writing.

Yes No Criteria
First, I found two examples of figurative language in the given sentence.
Next, I identified them as either simile, metaphor or personification.
I filled in all four sections of the chart of course!
I explained what the figurative language adds to the introduction to set the mood for the story.
My explanation makes sense from the text in the given sentence.

If you check all four yes buttons, chances are you earned 2 points. Way to go!

If you didn't check all four yes buttons, take a look at what was missing, and go back and revise your answer until you can check all four yes buttons!

When you are totally satisfied with your answer, print the Word document with your answer and score for your teacher.

Let's work with some figurative language in this same story.

Vocabulary

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