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Lesson 9
Evaluating Ideas and Themes
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Practice 2:

Instruction:

Red Cloud's powerful messages in "Indian Rights" are delivered with the purpose to increase understanding, address wrongs to his people, and request corrective action. He does so with tact and respect toward his audience. Look for generalizations that can be made throughout his speech. What can be said about the status of the first American's at the time of his speech? What can be said about the relationship between whites and natives? What can be said about Red Cloud's beliefs about the two races?


Indian Rights

Before Reading:

Read the prompt you will be answering, so that there is a place in your brain to file away ideas as you read! Taking notes would not be a bad idea either!

Short Answer Prompt:

After reading the first three paragraphs of Red Cloud's speech at a New York reception in his honor, you might make the generalization that he is convincing his audience of its responsibility to help the Natives because of shared values and the similarities between the two races.

  • Does the rest of the speech support this generalization?
  • Explain your answer with details from the selection.


Note
: What key elements will be needed for a full two point answer?


Choose ONE of the following three options for writing your response.

1.
If Microsoft Word is available on your computer, this document allows you to type your answer, use spell check, save, copy/paste text, and/or print the page to turn in.
<< Click here to open a word form for your response.
 
2.
This file can be printed, and allows you to use your best penmanship (yes, real writing instead of typing), and turn it in to your teacher.
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3.
Copy/Paste
If you are a student taking this class through IA, you will need to use this document for your response. Follow directions on your checklist to copy/paste into an e-mail.
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You are the an expert at scoring short answer responses now. Go ahead and score your own writing using this criteria:

Score
Criteria
2 points
  • evaluates appropriate information which leads to decision about author's purpose throughout the speech (Does the generalization from the beginning of the speech hold true throughout?)
  • develops thoughtful interpretations of author's statements
  • uses sufficient, relevant evidence from essay to support evaluation
1 point
  • evaluates limited information leading to decision about author's purpose throughout the speech (In answering the question: does the generalization from the beginning of the speech hold true throughout?) the response may be partial or not include the entire speech.
  • develops average or simple interpretations of author's statements
  • attempts to use evidence from essay to support claims; support may be limited or irrelevant (not make sense).
0 points
  • little or no understanding of the passage or figuring out author's purpose or if it changes at all
  • may answer, "I don't know."
  • no evidence from speech.

This may help identify the key elements in your writing.

Yes No Criteria
I wrote a sentence about the generalization in the first three paragraphs.
I figured out whether the generalization changes in the rest of the speech.
And I explained my evaluation with examples from the speech.

If you check all three yes buttons, chances are you earned 2 points! Way to go.

If you didn't check all three yes buttons, take a look at what was missing, and go back and revise your answer until you can check all three yes buttons!

When you are totally satisfied with your answer, print the Word document with your answer and score for your teacher.

Red Cloud's ideas are fairly intense. We can take a break and lighten up the mood with the next Practice item. Bring on Cosby!

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